From 6552b88382ef9fc572ba0c91f8bbdcb335c256b7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Anmol Sarraf <36872756+AnonSar@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 3 Apr 2023 18:37:39 +1000
Subject: [PATCH] fix(curriculum): reword instructions in `XMLHttpRequest`
 section (#49876)

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 ...post-data-with-the-javascript-xmlhttprequest-method.md | 8 +++++++-
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/curriculum/challenges/english/04-data-visualization/json-apis-and-ajax/post-data-with-the-javascript-xmlhttprequest-method.md b/curriculum/challenges/english/04-data-visualization/json-apis-and-ajax/post-data-with-the-javascript-xmlhttprequest-method.md
index 059f7dce49e..75b231d9b16 100644
--- a/curriculum/challenges/english/04-data-visualization/json-apis-and-ajax/post-data-with-the-javascript-xmlhttprequest-method.md
+++ b/curriculum/challenges/english/04-data-visualization/json-apis-and-ajax/post-data-with-the-javascript-xmlhttprequest-method.md
@@ -26,7 +26,13 @@ const body = JSON.stringify({ userName: userName, suffix: ' loves cats!' });
 xhr.send(body);
 ```
 
-You've seen several of these methods before. Here the `open` method initializes the request as a `POST` to the given URL of the external resource, and uses the `true` Boolean to make it asynchronous. The `setRequestHeader` method sets the value of an HTTP request header, which contains information about the sender and the request. It must be called after the `open` method, but before the `send` method. The two parameters are the name of the header and the value to set as the body of that header. Next, the `onreadystatechange` event listener handles a change in the state of the request. A `readyState` of `4` means the operation is complete, and a `status` of `201` means it was a successful request. The document's HTML can be updated. Finally, the `send` method sends the request with the `body` value, which the `userName` key was given by the user in the `input` field.
+You've seen several of these methods before. Here the `open` method initializes the request as a `POST` to the given URL of the external resource, and passes `true` as the third parameter - indicating to perform the operation asynchronously.
+
+The `setRequestHeader` method sets the value of an HTTP request header, which contains information about the sender and the request. It must be called after the `open` method, but before the `send` method. The two parameters are the name of the header and the value to set as the body of that header.
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+Next, the `onreadystatechange` event listener handles a change in the state of the request. A `readyState` of `4` means the operation is complete, and a `status` of `201` means it was a successful request. Therefore, the document's HTML can be updated.
+
+Finally, the `send` method sends the request with the `body` value. The `body` consists of a `userName` and a `suffix` key.
 
 # --instructions--